Re: [dtn] new BPbis spec reference mistakes

Lucas Kahlert <lucas.kahlert@tu-dresden.de> Wed, 23 August 2017 16:57 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dtn] new BPbis spec reference mistakes
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Hello,

I think the reference mistakes are still there in version 
draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-08.

Regards,
Lucas

On 14.07.2017 13:23, Lucas Kahlert wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> I think I have found some mistakes in the cross-references of the new 
> BPbis:
> 
>   - Section 5.14 Bundle Deletion does not exist, I think it should be 
> "Section 5.10"
>   - 5.4.1 Forwarding Contraindicated: "Proceed from Step 5", I think 
> Step 4 is meant
> 
> Regards,
> Lucas
> 
> On 23.06.2017 00:34, Burleigh, Scott C (312B) wrote:
>> Hi.  I just posted an updated BPbis specification that I think 
>> addresses nearly all of the comments on which we reached consensus, 
>> either over email or at IETF 98.  The one exception I can think of is 
>> the request to add references to formal definitions for CRC-16-ANSI 
>> and CRC-32, which I omitted because on a quick search I wasn’t able to 
>> find any; if anyone knows where those definitions live, please speak up.
>>
>> I think we may have two quite different approaches on the table for 
>> defining custody transfer outside of the BP specification.  I will be 
>> posting one of them in a few minutes and hope to post the other 
>> sometime tomorrow.
>>
>> Scott
>>
>>
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