[Ecrit] Fwd: AD review of draft-ietf-ecrit-dhc-lost-discovery
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Subject: [Ecrit] Fwd: AD review of draft-ietf-ecrit-dhc-lost-discovery
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FYI -------- Original-Nachricht -------- Datum: Wed, 7 Nov 2007 17:15:39 -0500 Von: "Peterson, Jon" <jon.peterson@neustar.biz> An: draft-ietf-ecrit-dhc-lost-discovery@tools.ietf.org CC: ecrit-chairs@tools.ietf.org Betreff: AD review of draft-ietf-ecrit-dhc-lost-discovery This document is basically fine. Two non-blocking comments: Section 1, Nit In order to interact with a LoST server, the LoST client finally needs to know its IP address. I presume here that "finally" means... firstly? Also, because this document deals with DHCP, the "its" is ambiguous - one could read it to signify the LoST client, not the LoST server (as I assume you intend). The text currently in Section 5: A DHCPv4 client MAY request a LoST server domain name in an Parameter Request List option, as described in [RFC2131]. Probably belongs in Section 4. - J _______________________________________________ Ecrit mailing list Ecrit@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ecrit
- [Ecrit] Fwd: AD review of draft-ietf-ecrit-dhc-lo… Hannes Tschofenig