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"King, Kimberly S." <KIMBERLY.S.KING@saic.com> Tue, 25 February 2003 14:52 UTC

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From: "King, Kimberly S." <KIMBERLY.S.KING@saic.com>
To: 'Henning Schulzrinne' <hgs@cs.columbia.edu>, "Peterson, Jon" <jon.peterson@neustar.biz>
Cc: sipping-emergency@ietf.org
Subject: RE: [Sipping-emergency] Re: [Sipping-emergency] draft-schulzrinne-sipping-emergency-req-00
Date: Tue, 25 Feb 2003 09:54:03 -0500
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Henning,

>"In last-mile access, an ECC replaces an analog (CAMA) or 
>digital (ISDN) 
>trunk with packet-based access,
>typically over one or more high-speed access lines such as DSL 
>or leased 
>lines."
>
>Suggestions on how to make this clearer are welcome.


I believe it isn't as clear because it disorients the reader.  The last mile
(reader is thinking from the perspective of being the client) has
packet-based access (access puts the reader in the perspective of being on
the "server" side).

I can't completely re-word it as I'm not totally clear what you are trying
to say but I'll take a shot at it.

"In the last mile situation, instead of calls being terminated by analog
(CAMA) or digital (ISDN) trunks, they are terminated by high-speed DSL or
leased line packet-based solutions."  

Kimberly
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