[Ecrit] draft review <draft-schulzrinne-sipping-emergency-req-01.txt>
Tschofenig Hannes <hannes.tschofenig@siemens.com> Sun, 06 March 2005 00:15 UTC
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hi henning,
i quickly read through your draft and here are a few high level comments:
* good document with an impressive list of requirements
(also addresses security specific requirements)
* i wonder whether the other draft authors have read this document. it
would be good to know how their requirements relate to the requirements
raised in this document.
things to improve with this document:
* a few sections address topics that are outside the scope of ecrit
* terminology needs to be enhanced and fixed
* a number of security related requirements have been addressed in the
document but the
security consideration section requires more work
* some people might argue that the language in the document is a bit too
sip focused
some some very minor comments at :
http://www.ietf-ecrit.org/comments/draft-schulzrinne-sipping-emergency-req-0
1_hannes.txt
ciao
hannes
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