[Ecrit] Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea-21: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Subject: [Ecrit] Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea-21: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea-21: Discuss When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- DISCUSS: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- This is a tiny point, but I think it needs fixing for clarity: 5.2. The AlertMsg-Error Header Field error-code = 1*3DIGIT The text below makes it clear that the error-code is 3 digits: The ErrorValue contains a 3-digit error code indicating what was wrong with the alert in the request. What you have above allows for 1, 2 or 3 digits. I think you meant: error-code = 3DIGIT ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I initially thought that error-codes are from the same namespace as SIP Status Codes. I think you should explicitly say that they are not. The first mention of HTTPS needs a normative reference. In Section 10.1: Encoding considerations: Uses XML, which can employ 8-bit characters, depending on the character encoding used. See [RFC7303], Section 3.2. This field of the form should say one of "7bit", "8bit", "binary" or "framed". I think in your case it is "binary", because UTF-16 charsets are not prohibited in your document.
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