Re: [Ecrit] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8147 (7752)
"Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com> Mon, 18 March 2024 03:45 UTC
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From: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 18 Mar 2024 13:45:04 +1000
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To: Randall Gellens <rg+ietf@coretechnologyconsulting.com>
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Subject: Re: [Ecrit] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8147 (7752)
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Done. -MSK On Wed, Jan 10, 2024 at 2:13 AM Randall Gellens < rg+ietf@coretechnologyconsulting.com> wrote: > This looks correct to me. I'd suggest, just for convenience of the reader, > adding a summary of the changes above the full changes, as follows: > ------------------------------ > > Replace all four occurrences of: > > <xs:any namespace="##any" processContents="lax" > > with: > <xs:any namespace="##other" processContents="lax" > > I do not have a login at rfc-editor.org to change the state. Perhaps > Murray or the RFC Editor can accept the errata and add the summary? > > --Randall > > On 9 Jan 2024, at 7:13, RFC Errata System wrote: > > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8147, > "Next-Generation Pan-European eCall". > ------------------------------ > > You may review the report below and at: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7752 > ------------------------------ > > Type: Technical > Reported by: Andreas Wehrmann andreas.wehrmann@strabag.com > > Section: 13 > Original Text > > <?xml version="1.0"?> > > <xs:schema > targetNamespace="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control" > xmlns:xs="http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema" > xmlns:pi="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control" > xmlns:xml="http://www.w3.org/XML/1998/namespace" > elementFormDefault="qualified" > attributeFormDefault="unqualified"> > > <xs:import namespace="http://www.w3.org/XML/1998/namespace"/> > > <xs:element name="EmergencyCallData.Control" > type="pi:controlType"/> > > <xs:complexType name="controlType"> > <xs:complexContent> > <xs:restriction base="xs:anyType"> > <xs:choice> > <xs:element name="capabilities" > type="pi:capabilitiesType"/> > <xs:element name="request" type="pi:requestType"/> > <xs:element name="ack" type="pi:ackType"/> > <xs:any namespace="##any" processContents="lax" > minOccurs="0" > maxOccurs="unbounded"/> > </xs:choice> > <xs:anyAttribute/> > </xs:restriction> > </xs:complexContent> > </xs:complexType> > > <xs:complexType name="ackType"> > <xs:complexContent> > <xs:restriction base="xs:anyType"> > <xs:sequence minOccurs="1" maxOccurs="unbounded"> > <xs:element name="actionResult" minOccurs="0" > maxOccurs="unbounded"> > <xs:complexType> > <xs:attribute name="action" > type="xs:token" > use="required"/> > <xs:attribute name="success" > type="xs:boolean" > use="required"/> > <xs:attribute name="reason" > type="xs:token"> > <xs:annotation> > <xs:documentation> > conditionally mandatory > when @success="false" > to indicate reason code > for a failure > </xs:documentation> > </xs:annotation> > </xs:attribute> > <xs:attribute name="details" > type="xs:string"/> > <xs:anyAttribute > processContents="skip"/> > </xs:complexType> > </xs:element> > <xs:any namespace="##any" processContents="lax" > minOccurs="0" > maxOccurs="unbounded"/> > </xs:sequence> > <xs:attribute name="ref" > type="xs:anyURI" > use="required"/> > > <xs:attribute name="received" > type="xs:boolean"/> > <xs:anyAttribute/> > </xs:restriction> > </xs:complexContent> > </xs:complexType> > > <xs:complexType name="capabilitiesType"> > <xs:complexContent> > <xs:restriction base="xs:anyType"> > <xs:sequence minOccurs="1" maxOccurs="unbounded"> > <xs:element name="request" > type="pi:requestType" > minOccurs="1" > maxOccurs="unbounded"/> > <xs:any namespace="##any" processContents="lax" > minOccurs="0" > maxOccurs="unbounded"/> > </xs:sequence> > <xs:anyAttribute/> > </xs:restriction> > </xs:complexContent> > </xs:complexType> > > <xs:complexType name="requestType"> > <xs:complexContent> > <xs:restriction base="xs:anyType"> > <xs:choice minOccurs="1" maxOccurs="unbounded"> > <xs:element name="text" minOccurs="0" > maxOccurs="unbounded"> > <xs:complexType> > <xs:simpleContent> > <xs:extension base="xs:string"> > <xs:anyAttribute > namespace="##any" > processContents="skip"/> > </xs:extension> > </xs:simpleContent> > </xs:complexType> > </xs:element> > <xs:any namespace="##any" processContents="lax" > minOccurs="0" > maxOccurs="unbounded"/> > </xs:choice> > <xs:attribute name="action" type="xs:token" > use="required"/> > > <xs:attribute name="int-id" type="xs:unsignedInt"/> > <xs:attribute name="persistence" > type="xs:duration"/> > <xs:attribute name="datatype" type="xs:token"/> > <xs:attribute name="supported-values" > type="xs:string"/> > <xs:attribute name="element-id" type="xs:token"/> > <xs:attribute name="requested-state" > type="xs:token"/> > <xs:anyAttribute/> > </xs:restriction> > </xs:complexContent> > </xs:complexType> > > </xs:schema> > Corrected Text > > <?xml version="1.0"?> > > <xs:schema > targetNamespace="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control" > xmlns:xs="http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema" > xmlns:pi="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control" > xmlns:xml="http://www.w3.org/XML/1998/namespace" > elementFormDefault="qualified" > attributeFormDefault="unqualified"> > > <xs:import namespace="http://www.w3.org/XML/1998/namespace"/> > > <xs:element name="EmergencyCallData.Control" > type="pi:controlType"/> > > <xs:complexType name="controlType"> > <xs:complexContent> > <xs:restriction base="xs:anyType"> > <xs:choice> > <xs:element name="capabilities" > type="pi:capabilitiesType"/> > <xs:element name="request" type="pi:requestType"/> > <xs:element name="ack" type="pi:ackType"/> > <xs:any namespace="##other" processContents="lax" > minOccurs="0" > maxOccurs="unbounded"/> > </xs:choice> > <xs:anyAttribute/> > </xs:restriction> > </xs:complexContent> > </xs:complexType> > > <xs:complexType name="ackType"> > <xs:complexContent> > <xs:restriction base="xs:anyType"> > <xs:sequence minOccurs="1" maxOccurs="unbounded"> > <xs:element name="actionResult" minOccurs="0" > maxOccurs="unbounded"> > <xs:complexType> > <xs:attribute name="action" > type="xs:token" > use="required"/> > <xs:attribute name="success" > type="xs:boolean" > use="required"/> > <xs:attribute name="reason" > type="xs:token"> > <xs:annotation> > <xs:documentation> > conditionally mandatory > when @success="false" > to indicate reason code > for a failure > </xs:documentation> > </xs:annotation> > </xs:attribute> > <xs:attribute name="details" > type="xs:string"/> > <xs:anyAttribute > processContents="skip"/> > </xs:complexType> > </xs:element> > <xs:any namespace="##other" processContents="lax" > minOccurs="0" > maxOccurs="unbounded"/> > </xs:sequence> > <xs:attribute name="ref" > type="xs:anyURI" > use="required"/> > > <xs:attribute name="received" > type="xs:boolean"/> > <xs:anyAttribute/> > </xs:restriction> > </xs:complexContent> > </xs:complexType> > > <xs:complexType name="capabilitiesType"> > <xs:complexContent> > <xs:restriction base="xs:anyType"> > <xs:sequence minOccurs="1" maxOccurs="unbounded"> > <xs:element name="request" > type="pi:requestType" > minOccurs="1" > maxOccurs="unbounded"/> > <xs:any namespace="##other" processContents="lax" > minOccurs="0" > maxOccurs="unbounded"/> > </xs:sequence> > <xs:anyAttribute/> > </xs:restriction> > </xs:complexContent> > </xs:complexType> > > <xs:complexType name="requestType"> > <xs:complexContent> > <xs:restriction base="xs:anyType"> > <xs:choice minOccurs="1" maxOccurs="unbounded"> > <xs:element name="text" minOccurs="0" > maxOccurs="unbounded"> > <xs:complexType> > <xs:simpleContent> > <xs:extension base="xs:string"> > <xs:anyAttribute > namespace="##any" > processContents="skip"/> > </xs:extension> > </xs:simpleContent> > </xs:complexType> > </xs:element> > <xs:any namespace="##other" processContents="lax" > minOccurs="0" > maxOccurs="unbounded"/> > </xs:choice> > <xs:attribute name="action" type="xs:token" > use="required"/> > > <xs:attribute name="int-id" type="xs:unsignedInt"/> > <xs:attribute name="persistence" > type="xs:duration"/> > <xs:attribute name="datatype" type="xs:token"/> > <xs:attribute name="supported-values" > type="xs:string"/> > <xs:attribute name="element-id" type="xs:token"/> > <xs:attribute name="requested-state" > type="xs:token"/> > <xs:anyAttribute/> > </xs:restriction> > </xs:complexContent> > </xs:complexType> > > </xs:schema> > Notes > > The complex types "controlType", "ackType", "capabilitiesType" and > "requestType" define extension points by using xs:any with namespace ##any. > This violates the "Unique Particle Attribution" rule for XSD 1.0 (see: > https://www.w3.org/wiki/UniqueParticleAttribution) and shows up as an > error in some tools. > I suggest changing the namespace to ##other like it's done in other > schemas (for example, RFC7865 defines extension points in this way: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7865#section-9 ). > Instructions: > > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". (If it is spam, it > will be removed shortly by the RFC Production Center.) Please > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party > will log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. > ------------------------------ > RFC8147 (draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-27) > > Title : Next-Generation Pan-European eCall > Publication Date : May 2017 > Author(s) : R. Gellens, H. Tschofenig > Category : PROPOSED STANDARD > Source : Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies > Area : Applications and Real-Time > Stream : IETF > Verifying Party : IESG > >
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