[Ecrit] draft-ietf-ecrit-dhc-lost-discovery: DISCUSS by Russ Housley

Hannes Tschofenig <Hannes.Tschofenig@gmx.net> Thu, 21 February 2008 09:05 UTC

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    *Document:*  	draft-ietf-ecrit-dhc-lost-discovery
*Version:* 	02
*Commented by:* 	Russ Housley
*Comment:* 	
  There are values that need to be assigned by IANA, but it appears that
  the document is not consistent about about the manner in which the
  assigned values should be inserted in the document.  For example, as
  pointd out in the Gen-ART Review by Vijay Gurbani, the code in
  Figure 1 is "TBD", but the text right underneath the figure refers
  to the code as "(TBD1)".  Consistent symbolic substitution is needed
  to avoid errors.


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