AW: [Ecrit] Updated Draft: "Requirements for Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies"

hi barry,

thanks for the comment. i have added it to the issue tracker. 

here is the suggested change: 

from:

"
   emergency address: The sip:uri, sips:uri, or tel:uri which represents
      the network address of the PSAP useful for the completion of a
      VoIP emergency call.
"

to:

"
   emergency address: The sip:uri, sips:uri, or tel:uri which represents
      the address of the PSAP useful for the completion of an emergency call.
"

i also changed 'network address' to 'address' since the term "network address" should not be misunderstood as network layer address (which would then be wrong).

ciao
hannes

-----Ursprüngliche Nachricht-----
Von: Barry Dingle [mailto:barry.dingle@bigfoot.com.au] 
Gesendet: Montag, 5. September 2005 06:48
An: Tschofenig, Hannes
Cc: ecrit@ietf.org; Tracey Annear
Betreff: Re: [Ecrit] Updated Draft: "Requirements for Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies"

Hannes,

The draft is looking very good.

One small comment - in Section 2 , the definition of "emergency address" should be more general than 'a VoIP emergency call' because this document relates to multiple services. I suggest that the last part of the definition read: " ....... which represents the network address of the PSAP useful for the completion of an emergency call."

Alternatively, it could be made more specific with the words " ....... which represents the network address of the PSAP useful for the completion of a VoIP or other general Internet multimedia emergency call." (Words taken from the Abstract.)

I prefer the first option. 

Cheers,
/Barry

Barry DINGLE
Telecommunications Consultant
Fellow of the University of Melbourne
Chair - ACIF Customer Equipment and Cable Reference Panel (CECRP) 
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Tschofenig, Hannes wrote: 
hi all, 

please find an update of the 'Requirements for Emergency Context
Resolution with Internet Technologies' draft at: 
http://www.ietf-ecrit.org/cache/draft-ietf-ecrit-requirements-00.txt

ciao
hannes

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