[Edm] Review of draft-edm-protocol-greasing-02
Tommy Pauly <tpauly@apple.com> Sun, 05 November 2023 11:46 UTC
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Subject: [Edm] Review of draft-edm-protocol-greasing-02
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Hi Lucas, EDM, I’ve reviewed the document and filed an editorial PR: https://github.com/intarchboard/draft-protocol-greasing/pull/9 Additionally, I have a couple specific suggestions that we can discuss at our upcoming meeting: - Section 3 talks about how protocol receivers should not special-case greased code points; I wonder if we can pull out a more concrete recommendation for document authors to add text to their documents. - For the IANA tag of “reserved for greasing”, do we agree on this particular text, and when we do can we make it a formal recommendation (not just a “such as”)? - I’m wondering if we could have a short summary somewhere of bullets of concrete recommendations for protocol document authors like the points above - Let’s add more examples to Section 4 beyond QUIC frames Best, Tommy
- [Edm] Review of draft-edm-protocol-greasing-02 Tommy Pauly