Re: [eman] [MIB-DOCTORS] mib doctor review of draft-ietf-eman-rfc4133bis-05.txt
Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> Mon, 28 January 2013 13:16 UTC
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Subject: Re: [eman] [MIB-DOCTORS] mib doctor review of draft-ietf-eman-rfc4133bis-05.txt
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Dan, > On Tue, Jan 15, 2013 at 01:07:43PM +0000, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote: > >>>>> f) In 2.12.2, can we find a better phrase than "SNMP ARCH [RFC3411] >>>>> method of context identification"? For example, "an SnmpEngineID >>>>> and ContextName pair [RFC3411] for context identification". >>>>> >>>> [[DR]] This is the verbiage used in RFC 4133. Unless we need to fix a >>> bug I suggest to avoid such changes. >>> >>> It is document clarity. But I won't insist on this, I just find the >>> current text unnecessarily confusing. >>> >>>>> g) Overall, replace MIBs with MIB modules. >>>>> >>>> [[DR]] Same as the previous point. >>> Again, it is document clarity. It is rather obvious that this change >>> does not break anything, no? Let Bert decide - he is the owner of the >>> one MIB many MIB modules song. ;-) >>> >> [[DR]] I also sing the song when I review new documents, but in this case we would interfere in the text of the document that is now at version 4. > So what? Time to fix this. Anyway, I will not fight for this if > editors believe it is best to not update vocabularity to current I agree with Juergen on the two points above. Every single time I speak SNMP/MIB with someone, I try to use the right language, and correct my interlocutor if needed, with a little of education. I don't understand why we don't jump on the opportunity to correct this document. There are two types of audience for this new document: 1. The people who have not read the first 3 versions. So I guess not that familiar with the SNMP/MIB. They would benefit from the right terminology 2. The persons who need a diff with the previous version. So I guess familiar with SNMP/MIB. And the improvements would be obvious to them. Therefore, there is no harm in improving the document. And I don't buy in the argument that we need to keep consistency with RFC 4133 ..; for something that is not clear. Regards, Benoit > rules. > > /js >
- [eman] mib doctor review of draft-ietf-eman-rfc41… Juergen Schoenwaelder
- Re: [eman] mib doctor review of draft-ietf-eman-r… Benoit Claise
- Re: [eman] mib doctor review of draft-ietf-eman-r… Mouli Chandramouli (moulchan)
- Re: [eman] mib doctor review of draft-ietf-eman-r… Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
- Re: [eman] mib doctor review of draft-ietf-eman-r… Juergen Schoenwaelder
- Re: [eman] mib doctor review of draft-ietf-eman-r… Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
- Re: [eman] mib doctor review of draft-ietf-eman-r… Mouli Chandramouli (moulchan)
- Re: [eman] mib doctor review of draft-ietf-eman-r… Juergen Schoenwaelder
- Re: [eman] mib doctor review of draft-ietf-eman-r… Juergen Schoenwaelder
- Re: [eman] [MIB-DOCTORS] mib doctor review of dra… Benoit Claise
- Re: [eman] [MIB-DOCTORS] mib doctor review of dra… Romascanu, Dan (Dan)