Re: [eman] MIB Doctor Review of draft-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib-13

On Jan 24, 2014:5:47 AM, at 5:47 AM, Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> wrote:

> Hi Tom,
>> 
>>  Or instead of copy/paste, just put in a reference to it. 
> Not sure what else you want, next to:
>        Please refer to [EMAN-FMWK] for the definitions of the following 
>         terminology used in this draft: 

	I was suggesting that just copying/pasting terms without their definitions wasn't very useful - at least to me a new reader of the draft. I simply opened the Framework and looked up some of the definitions.  So with that in mind, I was suggesting that you eliminate the terms and simply put a reference to the EMAN-FMWK there.

	--Tom

> Regards, Benoit
>> 
>>  --Tom
>> 
>>> 
>>> Ok we have all that in the framework and that should just be copied over.
>>> This is what we have in framework:
>>> 
>>> """
>>>  Energy Management System (EnMS)
>>>  An Energy Management System is a combination of hardware and software used to administer a network with the primary purpose of energy management. 
>>>  NOTES: 1. An Energy Management System according to [ISO50001] (ISO-EnMS) is a set of systems or procedures upon which organizations can develop and implement an energy policy, set targets, action plans and take into account legal requirements related to energy use. An ISO-EnMS allows organizations to improve energy performance and demonstrate conformity to requirements, standards, and/or legal requirements. 
>>> """
>>> Jp
>>> Sent from my iPad 
>>> (expect ridiculous spelling mistakes) 
>>> 
>>> On Jan 21, 2014, at 10:29 PM, "Thomas Nadeau" <tnadeau@lucidvision.com> wrote:
>>> 
>>>> 
>>>>    That is cool,but please put in a reference and (brief) explanation into the text somewhere. To the casual or new reader, it is not obvious. *)
>>>> 
>>>>    --Tom
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>>> Hi Tom
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks. Still going through the comments. For the first one regarding EnMS acronym. That's was discussed at length and we adopted it since ISO50001 used that to describe a management system for energy (as opposed to NMS)
>>>>> 
>>>>> Not great but what's in use.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Jp
>>>>> 
>>>>> Sent from my iPad 
>>>>> (expect ridiculous spelling mistakes) 
>>>>> 
>>>>> On Jan 21, 2014, at 9:52 PM, "Thomas Nadeau" <tnadeau@lucidvision.com> wrote:
>>>>> 
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>>>>> 
>>>> 
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Re: [eman] MIB Doctor Review of draft-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib-13

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