Re: [Emu] Second WG Last Call for EAP-AKA' PFS
Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Fri, 16 December 2022 17:15 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Emu] Second WG Last Call for EAP-AKA' PFS
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The document looks good to me. Thank you for the _7.5. Post-Quantum Considerations_ section. If the authors are using kramdown, they could consider enable aasvg processing of their ascii art diagrams. For instance: https://www.sandelman.ca/tmp/fig1.svg -- Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca> . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting ) Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide
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- Re: [Emu] Second WG Last Call for EAP-AKA' PFS Michael Richardson
- Re: [Emu] Second WG Last Call for EAP-AKA' PFS John Mattsson
- Re: [Emu] Second WG Last Call for EAP-AKA' PFS John Mattsson
- Re: [Emu] Second WG Last Call for EAP-AKA' PFS Michael Richardson
- Re: [Emu] Second WG Last Call for EAP-AKA' PFS Peter Yee
- Re: [Emu] Second WG Last Call for EAP-AKA' PFS John Mattsson