Re: [Extra] Magnus Westerlund's Discuss on draft-ietf-extra-sieve-mailboxid-06: (with DISCUSS)

[Magnus Westerlund <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

 

Haven't seen an answer to my question if removing the formal syntax really
was an appropriate resolution of my discuss. I have removed my discuss as I
am stepping down. I think the responsible AD should take a serious
consideration of this before they approve the document. 

 

Cheers

 

Magnus Westerlund

 

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Hi,

 

I was unfortunately sick last week so I didn't managed to respond before you
done the work. 

 

>From my perspective adding the references would have been better as formal
syntax if correct are very useful. I don't know enough about sieve
specifications to know if removing the formal language here is good enough
or making the specification a bit worse. My discuss was only to ensure
things was clear, and though some small wording additions and correct
references would have resolved things.

 

WG and Barry, what are your opinion on this change?

 

Cheers

 

Magnus Westerlund

 

 

 

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Hi Magnus,

 

Sorry for the lack of response on this - I missed it somehow at the time!

 

 

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DISCUSS:

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First part is a formality discuss that likely is fairly easy to resolve

 

So this document uses formal syntax, however it does not explicitly
reference

which. So I noticed RFC 5228 that do reference RFC 4234 which is now
obsolete,

and the current in force version of ABNF is RFC 5234. Also as no WSP are

included in the rules, this document appears to use ABNF to express RFC 5228

grammar and not parsing syntax. So please clarify prior to the usages what
the

formal language is and what it represents.

 

So this needs to be done prior to Section 5. But, can you please check that
you

actually have the same level of  formal syntax in Section 5 that goes
through

RFC 8580 as what is in Section 8. Otherwise please clarify both.

 

I'm happy to drop the formal language section entirely.  I just checked
RFC8579 which describes a very similar extension and it has no formal ABNF
section.  Would you be satisfied with having the ABNF dropped entirely and
using prose and descriptions similar to what's in RFC8579?

 

Secondly, I do consider the defining text first paragraph of in Section 4.1
so

hard to interpret that it must be fixed prior to publication. So although
you

already are going to address it based on discussion of Martin Duke's
comment, I

want to hold a discuss on this.

 

I will wordsmith that and post a new draft.

 

Thanks,


Bron.

 

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