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Re: [Extra] Working Group Last Call - inprogress

Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Thu, 16 November 2023 18:08 UTC

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Hi,

On 30/10/2023 11:36, Bron Gondwana wrote:
> My apologies to Marco, this document should have had a Working Group 
> Last Call ages ago:
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-extra-imap-inprogress/
>
> So I'm starting a Working Group Last Call now - please try to get any 
> comments in by the end of the EXTRA meeting at IETF118, which is in a 
> little over a week from now!
>
> This will allow for an update that addresses any comments during the 
> IETF week (since we're in embargo now).  I'll then hold off a couple 
> more days before submitting to allow any final feedback after that 
> meeting as well, planning to submit on *Monday, Nov 13 *unless there 
> are remaining issues.

I am sorry I missed the WGLC deadline, but I have a few small comments.

Overall I think the document is in a good shape and nearly ready for 
publication as an RFC. A few comments below:

1) I really miss some examples. While the document looks correct, adding 
both COPY and SEARCH examples would improve its usefulness to readers.

2) A little thing:

8.  Normative References

    [RFC4466]  Melnikov, A. and C. Daboo, "Collected Extensions to IMAP4
               ABNF", RFC 4466, DOI 10.17487/RFC4466, April 2006,
               <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc4466>.

I doubt this is being used. I can't see anything in the ABNF section. Can the author please double check and remove this reference, if it is not needed?


Thank you,

Alexey

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