Re: [Extra] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-extra-imap-replace-02: (with COMMENT)

Stuart Brandt <stujenerin@aol.com> Wed, 24 October 2018 11:56 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Extra] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-extra-imap-replace-02: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks, Ben. I agree with all 3 comments and will make the necessary 
corrections.

On 10/24/2018 12:45 AM, Ben Campbell wrote:
> Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-extra-imap-replace-02: Yes
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> Thanks for this effort. I am balloting "yes", but I have some minor (mostly
> editorial) comments:
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> §1: Is there a reason not to use the new boilerplate from RFC 8174?
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> §3.4: "the intermediate states produced do not occur,"
> That seems an odd statement; one might say that if a state did not occur it was
> not produced. Would it make sense to just say "the intermediate states do not
> occur"?
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> §3.5: "Unlike the APPEND command which is valid..."
> Missing comma before "which".
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