Re: [Fecframe] [payload] LC draft-ietf-fecframe-rtp-raptor-05.txt

"Ali C. Begen (abegen)" <abegen@cisco.com> Mon, 17 October 2011 15:18 UTC

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From: "Ali C. Begen (abegen)" <abegen@cisco.com>
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Minor comments:
- The framework draft was published as RFC 6363, the citation should be updated.
- 2119 keywords should not be used in the intro section. Just make them small letters.
- Provide some example apps in the registration section (Applications that use this media type: is empty)
- Controller should be PAYLOAD WG not AVT. 
- I-D.ietf-fecframe-sdp-elements is also RFC 6364 now.

-acbegen

> -----Original Message-----
> From: payload-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:payload-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Greg Shepherd
> Sent: Monday, October 10, 2011 4:03 PM
> To: fecframe@ietf.org; payload@ietf.org
> Subject: [payload] LC draft-ietf-fecframe-rtp-raptor-05.txt
> 
> Please read, review, comment - a comment of support is also helpful -
> ASAP. This WG is very close to being finished and this is one of the
> few last bits.
> 
> http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-fecframe-rtp-raptor-05.txt
> 
> Thanks!,
> Greg
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