Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05

Peter: Thank you very much for your (re)review. Authors, have you seen the comments?

For what it is worth, I have placed a no-objection ballot for this draft. (Largely based on this review, because I'm on vacation and have less time to do my own review, which I would normally do at least briefly.)

Jari

On Aug 11, 2013, at 7:52 AM, Peter Yee <peter@akayla.com> wrote:

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> Document: draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05
> Reviewer: Peter Yee
> Review Date: July-07-2013
> IETF LC End Date: July-17-2013
> IESG Telechat date: August-15-2013
> 
> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an Informational
> RFC, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits]
> 
> This review is the same as the IETF LC review of this draft, which remain
> unchanged for the telechat.  This draft defines DNS Resources Record Types
> for encoding IEEE 802 EUI-48 and EUI-64 addresses.  Potential privacy issues
> with this scheme have been soundly beaten to death with extreme prejudice.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits:
> 
> Page 1, Abstract, 1st paragraph: After "e.g.", append a comma and delete an
> extraneous space before "Ethernet".
> 
> Page 3, Introduction, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: change "This" to "These"
> and change "specification defines" to "specifications define". 
> 
> Page 3, Introduction, 2nd paragraph: append a comma after "e.g.".
> 
> 		-Peter Yee
> 
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