[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-applicability-06

Joel Halpern via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 25 June 2019 01:11 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-applicability-06

Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-babel-applicability-06
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2019-06-24
IETF LC End Date: 2019-07-04
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:
   In section 2.2, in talking about "metric M", if I have understood properly,
   I think it would be clearer if you referred to "metric value M".

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