[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dkim-ssp-10.txt
"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> Fri, 29 May 2009 07:54 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dkim-ssp-10.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document:draft-ietf-dkim-ssp-10.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com> Review Date: 2009-05-29 IESG Telechat date: 4 June 2009 Summary: The document is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC. I reviewed versions 7 and 8 of this document, and my comments were addressed. I have a nit comment related to changes introduced in versions -09 and -10. Nits/editorial comments: - At the end of Section 4.1, there is now a "Note" (the last one) that includes normative text. I don't know why this last paragraph is now a Note, but I believe notes should be informative in nature and should not contain normative text. The recommendation here is to remove the word "Note" from the last paragraph. /Miguel -- Miguel A. Garcia +34-91-339-3608 Ericsson Spain
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