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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-dtls-connection-id-10

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From: Thomas Fossati <Thomas.Fossati@arm.com>
To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-dtls-connection-id-10
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Hi Russ,

Thank you for your review.

On 15/03/2021, 15:29, "Gen-art on behalf of Russ Housley via Datatracker" <gen-art-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> Section 4: For increased clarity, I suggest:
> OLD:
>    real_type  The content type describing the payload.
> NEW:
>    real_type  The content type describing the cleartext payload.

https://github.com/tlswg/dtls-conn-id/issues/97

t

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