[Gen-art] General Area IETF LC review of draft-ietf-imss-fc-nsm-mib-04.txt

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I was selected as General Area Review Team reviewer for this
specification (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

I've reviewed this document for overall, general issues.  I see that the
MIB doctors have commented on MIB-specific issues.  

Overall, I found this well written and didn't find any nits.  For what
its worth, I believe this is ready for publication.

thanks,
John

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