[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-jsonpath-iregexp-06

Russ Housley via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 12 May 2023 14:53 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-jsonpath-iregexp-06

Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Almost Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-jsonpath-iregexp-06
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2023-05-12
IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-22
IESG Telechat date: unknown


Summary: Almost Ready


Major Concerns: None.


Minor Concerns:

Section 3: A reference to ABNF is needed.  Since %s is being used,
I believe that a reference to RFC 7405 is required.  Alternatively,
the paragraph in Section 1.1 could be moved to Section 3.


Nits:

Section 3.1: s/_checking_/checking/

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-j… Russ Housley via Datatracker
Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review… Carsten Bormann