[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-arp-mediation-19
Pete McCann <mccap@petoni.org> Tue, 24 April 2012 05:50 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-arp-mediation-19 Reviewer: Peter McCann Review Date: 2012-04-24 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: 2012-04-26 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: The only negative changes in this version with respect to -18 were the cross-referenced section numbers, some of which now have a trailing period. Also, the reference to multiple sections that appears in Section 4.1.6 was changed to a perhaps incorrect value.