[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-krb-wg-camellia-cts-01

["Joel M. Halpern" <[e-mail]>]

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Document: draft-ietf-krb-wg-camellia-cts-01
     Camellia Encryption for Kerberos 5
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date:13-Sept-2012
IETF LC End Date: 26-Sept-2012
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:
	The document seems to use "random2key" (in section 3) and 
"random-to-key" (in section 4) to represent the same thing, apparently 
meaning the "random-to-key" identity function of section 6.
	Section 6 defines Ki in a different way than section 4.  Section 4 
apparently uses K0 and Ki to mean K(0) and K(i) for the iteration.  (And 
then in the next line uses K1, K2, ... Kn for these, without parens.) 
But section 6 Ki is for a specific value in the encrypt/decrypt 
functions.  The simple solution would seem to be to consistently use 
parenthesis in section 4.

Nits/editorial comments: