[Gen-art] review: draft-leiba-urnbis-ietf-namespace-01
"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Fri, 18 January 2013 00:34 UTC
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Cc: Pete Resnick <presnick@qualcomm.com>, gen-art@ietf.org, Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
Subject: [Gen-art] review: draft-leiba-urnbis-ietf-namespace-01
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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Document: draft-leiba-urnbis-ietf-namespace-01
Registration of Second-Level URI Namespaces Under "ietf"
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 17-Jan-2013
IETF LC End Date: 11-Feb-2013
IESG Telechat date: 21-Feb-2013
Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
Major issues: None.
Minor issues:
Is thee a reason the Abstract does not include the full final
sentence from the Introduction?
Nits/editorial comments: None.
- [Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2013… A. Jean Mahoney
- [Gen-art] review: draft-leiba-urnbis-ietf-namespa… Joel M. Halpern
- [Gen-art] review: draft-leiba-urnbis-ietf-namespa… Joel M. Halpern