[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-perrault-behave-natv2-mib-03.txt
Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Thu, 30 April 2015 04:04 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-perrault-behave-natv2-mib-03.txt
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-perrault-behave-natv2-mib-03.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 2015-04-29 IETF LC End Date: 2015-04-29 Summary: There are some minor issues in the draft that need to be fixed before publication as a Proposed Standard. * Some objects and the their textual conventions vary only by case. There are three such instances natv2SubscriberIndex and Natv2SubscriberIndex natv2InstanceIndex and Natv2InstanceIndex natv2PoolIndex and Natv2PoolIndex * The natv2PoolRangeBegin and natv2PoolRangeEnd do not have an immediately preceding InetAddressType object as required by RFC4001. Thanks Suresh
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