[Gen-art] draft-murchison-webdav-prefer-11

[Stewart Bryant <[e-mail]>]

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Document: draft-murchison-webdav-prefer-11
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 21 Dec 2016
IETF LC End Date: 16 January 2017
IESG Telechat date: Unknown


Summary: Ready with issues

This is a well written document with some minor editorial issues that need
to be looked at before it is sent to the RFC Editor.


Issues:

 From ID-nits:

   -- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC7240, but the
      abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.

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SB> The following suggests an open issue, which needs to be
SB> closed, or if closed already, the issue warning needs to be removed.

Open Issues

    o  Should we add any text regarding caching responses in Section 3?

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3.1.  Successful State-Changing Requests


    representating the current state resource in the resulting 201
SB> representating - do you mean representing?

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3.2.  Unsuccessful Conditional State-Changing Requests

    Frequently, clients using a state-changing method such as those
    listed above will make them conditional by including either an If-
    Match or If-None-Match [RFC7232] header field in the request.  This
    is done to prevent the client from accidentially overwriting a
SB> s/accidentially/accidentally./

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9.3.  URIs

SB> I think that this section needs a "remove on publishing instruction"
SB> since I think you have given instructions to remove all the
SB> text that calls its entries.

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