[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-storm-iser-12
Pete McCann <mccap@petoni.org> Tue, 23 October 2012 01:42 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-storm-iser-12
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-storm-iser-12 Reviewer: Peter McCann Review Date: 2012-10-22 IETF LC End Date: 2012-10-22 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: page 38: iSERHelloREquired SHOULD BE: iSERHelloRequired