[Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-avtcore-avp-codecs-02.txt
Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Fri, 21 June 2013 04:37 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-avtcore-avp-codecs-02.txt
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-avp-codecs-02.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2013-06-03 IETF LC End Date: 2013-06-11 IESG Telechat date: 2013-06-27 Summary: Ready -------- Comments: --------- This removes a bit of cruft from an established standard, and that seems like a good thing to do. Nit: ---- According to normal practice, the abstract should also specifically mention RFC 3551: "This document updates the RTP/AVP profile (RFC 3551)..."
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