[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-interarea-03.txt
Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Fri, 09 May 2008 22:34 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-interarea-03.txt
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-interarea-03.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication but I have two minor comments. Minor ===== * The document uses a weird form of depicting prefixes e.g. 192.0.2/24 used in multiple locations. These should be properly written as 192.0.2.0/24. * The document uses the address 192.0.0.0/16 as an example address while the address range to be used for documentation is 192.0.2.0/24. I recommend staying inside this block for examples. Cheers Suresh _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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