[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-sztp-csr-11

Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 24 November 2021 05:35 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-sztp-csr-11

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-netconf-sztp-csr-11

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2021-11-23
IETF LC End Date: 2021-11-23
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.


Major issues:


Minor issues:


Nits/editorial comments:

[Page 3], Section 1.1 "bootstraped"->"bootstrapped"

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-n… Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker
Re: [Gen-art] [netconf] Genart last call review o… Kent Watsen
Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review… Lars Eggert