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Re: [Gen-art] [netconf] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-sztp-csr-11

Kent Watsen <kent@watsen.net> Mon, 29 November 2021 15:39 UTC

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From: Kent Watsen <kent@watsen.net>
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Date: Mon, 29 Nov 2021 15:39:48 +0000
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [netconf] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-sztp-csr-11
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Hi Meral,

Thank you for your review!  I have fixed the typo found in our local copy.  An updated draft with this fix will be posted as soon as the Secdir review discussion completes.

Thanks again,
Kent (and Russ and Sean)


> On Nov 24, 2021, at 12:35 AM, Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-netconf-sztp-csr-11
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2021-11-23
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-11-23
> IESG Telechat date: NA
> 
> 
> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
> 
> 
> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> [Page 3], Section 1.1 "bootstraped"->"bootstrapped"
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