[Gen-art] RE: Gen-art reveiw of draft-ietf-pce-discovery-reqs-04

Hi Ron

Thanks for the review,

>During the 48-hour author review, you might want to clean up the 
>reference to RFC 2119 so that the ID Nit-checker will stop 
>complaining.

OK will do that

Regards

JL

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : rbonica@juniper.net [mailto:rbonica@juniper.net] 
> Envoyé : mardi 30 mai 2006 22:00
> À : gen-art@ietf.org; LE ROUX Jean-Louis RD-CORE-LAN
> Objet : Gen-art reveiw of draft-ietf-pce-discovery-reqs-04
> 
> Background for those who may be unaware of GenART:
> 
> GenART is the Area Review Team for the General Area of the IETF.
> We advise the General Area Director (i.e. the IETF/IESG 
> chair) by providing more in depth reviews than he could do 
> himself of documents that come up for final decision in IESG 
> telechat.  I was selected as the GenART member to review this 
> document.  Below is my review, which was written specifically 
> with an eye to the GenART process, but since I believe that 
> it will be useful to have these comments more widely 
> distributed, others outside the GenART group are included.
> 
> Review criteria: "Is this document a reasonable contribution 
> to the area of Internet engineering which it covers?  If not, 
> what changes would make it so?"
> 
> This draft is very well written and on the right track.
> 
> During the 48-hour author review, you might want to clean up 
> the reference to RFC 2119 so that the ID Nit-checker will 
> stop complaining.
> 
>                                   Ron
> 

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