[Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-geopriv-civic-address-recommendations-02
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-civic-address-recommendations-02 Reviewer: Pete McCann Review Date: 09 June 2009 IETF LC End Date: 09 June 2009 IESG Telechat date: (unknown) Summary: Ready with nits Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: Section 3: s/ambigious/ambiguous/ s/receipients/recipients/ s/in border region/in a border region/ s/PIDF-LO elements/PIDF-LO Elements/ Section 4: s/interopability/interoperability/ Section 4.1, item 2: s/whether or not they are/whether or not it is/ Section 4.1: s/container, however,/container; however,/ Section 4.2.2: s/exclusively, alternatively/exclusively; alternatively,/ Section 4.2.3: s/optional or not to be used, and/optional, or not to be used, an/ s/must not be used, street suffixes/must not be used. Street suffixes/ Section 4.2.4: s/address consideration/address considerations/ Section 4.2.5: s/local names itself identify/local name itself identifies/ s/may either assist/may assist/ s/In case that/In the case that/ s/docuiment/document/ s/receipients/recipients/ Section 4.2.6: s/address consideration/address considerations/ s/RECOMMENDED, however,/RECOMMENDED; however,/ Section 6.1.3: s/Registration are sorted/Registrations are sorted/ Section 6.2: s/form the official/from the official/ s/Austrian Building an Habitation registry/Austrian Building and Habitation registry/ Appendix A: s/an uniform/a uniform/ s/whole Austria/the whole of Austria/ Section A.1: s/optional, the other Elements/optional, and the other Elements/ Section A.6: s/URI to his RFC/URI to this RFC/
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