[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-ipsec-tunnels-04.txt

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Date: Fri, 19 Jan 2007 06:05:08 -0500
From: rfgraveman@nac.net
To: Pekka Savola <psavola@funet.fi>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-ipsec-tunnels-04.txt
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Hi Pekka,

This is fine. Editorially, I suggest:

>>  An important consideration in determining whether to use IPsec tunnel
>>  mode is whether the IPsec tunnel mode SA is modeled as an interface.
>>  This notion of interface is logical - any time a system, host or
s/ - /: /
>>  router, sends a datagram, it has to account for having done so using
>>  the RFC 2863 Interface MIB.  To do so, the system derives ifIndex from
>>  the route entry (see InetCidrRouteEntry in RFC 4292) that it uses to
>>  forward the   datagram, or from the IpDefaultRouterEntry described
s/the /the/
>>  in RFC 4293.  The management information accessed via the ifIndex
>>  is "the interface" from a management and configuration perspective.

Rich




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