[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-payload-rfc3016bis-01.txt
Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Mon, 27 June 2011 04:28 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-payload-rfc3016bis-01.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-payload-rfc3016bis-01.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 2011/06/26 IESG Telechat date: 2011/06/30 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard but has some editorial issues that need to be fixed. Editorial ========= * Section 1.1 The abbreviation VOP is used before definition. Please expand it before first use. * Section 3 s/configurating/configuration/ * Section 6.1 s/AudioMuxElement/audioMuxElement/ Thanks Suresh
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