[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mile-iodef-guidance-10
Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Tue, 22 August 2017 23:08 UTC
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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mile-iodef-guidance-10 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2017-08-22 IETF LC End Date: 2017-08-25 IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-31 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I have comments. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 3], "should chose"---->"should choose" -[Page 4], "language an the"---->"language and the" -[Page 5], "that an successful"---->"that a successful" -[Page 6], "can cary greatly"---->"can caryy greatly" -[Page 8], "excercise"---->"exercise" -[Page 8],"compteting"---->"competing" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-… Meral Shirazipour
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Kathleen Moriarty
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