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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03

Sara Dickinson <sara@sinodun.com> Wed, 18 December 2019 13:47 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03
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> On 3 Dec 2019, at 06:52, Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> wrote:
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
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> For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2019-12-02
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-02
> IESG Telechat date: NA
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> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC with some issues (I would recommend taking into consideration the comments received on the mailing list)

Hi Meral, 

Thanks for the review!

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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
> It would have been interesting to have this draft also mention the additional/potential risks for non-web applications. IoT was briefly mentioned in Section 3.6. What about other applications? Is there any other privacy risks beyond just identifying the content being requested?
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It is a good point but nothing really springs to mind in terms of additional concrete privacy risks I’ve seen documented that have been identified for non-web applications. There have been various reports of malware using DoH but they tend to identify attacks that are equally possible with other forms of encryption…..

Sara.

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