[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-dhcp-11
Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Fri, 04 April 2014 07:43 UTC
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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-pcp-dhcp-11.txt Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 4 April 2014 IETF LC End Date: 1 April 2014 IESG Telechat date: 10 April 2014 Summary: My review comments on a previous version (-09) of the document have been addressed, and the document is now ready for publication. Major issues: - Minor issues: - Nits/editorial comments: - Regards, Christer
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-dhcp-11 Christer Holmberg
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