[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-reflect-octets-07
Enrico Marocco <enrico.marocco@telecomitalia.it> Wed, 14 July 2010 13:16 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-reflect-octets-07
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-reflect-octets-07 Reviewer: Enrico Marocco Review Date: 2010-07-14 IETF LC End Date: 2010-07-14 Summary: Ready with nits Major issues: None. Minor issues: None. Nits/editorial comments: S. 1., third paragraph, last sentence: closing parenthesis mark missing. Words such as "IF", "AND", "OR" and "BOTH" are often capitalized (e.g. in sections 3.3., 3.4., 4.1.3., 4.2.1., 4.2.3.) for no apparently no particular reason nor consistently through the document.
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