[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05

Scott Brim <scott.brim@gmail.com> Mon, 24 February 2014 21:57 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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Document: draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05
Reviewer: Scott Brim
Review Date: 2014-02-24
IETF LC End Date: 2014-03-14
IESG Telechat date:

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: