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Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers-11

Rob Sayre <sayrer@gmail.com> Thu, 01 June 2023 22:12 UTC

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From: Rob Sayre <sayrer@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 01 Jun 2023 15:12:08 -0700
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers-11
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Hi,

I put up a PR:
https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/pull/2561

The current text is something one would hear in spoken American English,
but it's not usually done in writing, and it mixes pluralization and the
passive voice in an unidiomatic way.

I'm not attached to my suggestion, but the current text is a bit off.

thanks,
Rob


On Wed, May 24, 2023 at 11:12 PM Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> wrote:

> Joel, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for
> this document.
>
> Lars
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> > On Mar 18, 2023, at 05:02, Joel Halpern via Datatracker <
> noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> > Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> > Review result: Ready
> >
> > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> > Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers-11
> > Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> > Review Date: 2023-03-17
> > IETF LC End Date: 2023-03-21
> > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> >
> > Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard
> >
> > Major issues: N/A
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> > Minor issues: N/A
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