[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-opsawg-syslog-alarm-02.txt
Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Wed, 05 August 2009 22:55 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-opsawg-syslog-alarm-02.txt
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-opsawg-syslog-alarm-02.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Proposed Standard, but I have a few comments. Minor ===== * Please replace reference to obsolete RFC1738 with a reference to RFC4248 or RFC4266 or both depending on what is required. * Section 4: Replace the nonexistent reference [Syslog] with [RFC5424] if that is what you intended to use. Thanks Suresh
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sys… Suresh Krishnan