RE: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-santesson-tls-supp-00.txt

The updated draft 01 has amended the IANA considerations section
requesting this number to be assigned.

Stefan Santesson
Program Manager, Standards Liaison
Windows Security

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Tom-PT Taylor [mailto:taylor@nortel.com]
> Sent: den 12 april 2006 15:18
> To: Stefan Santesson; Russ Housley
> Cc: gen-art@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of
draft-santesson-tls-supp-00.txt
> 
> Apologies to all for not following up earlier on one more item. In
> section 2, the enum adding supplemental_data as a HandshakeType has
> "TBD" for the value. I don't see an IANA registry for these values, so
I
> assume this has to be filled in at some point.
> 
> Looking at draft-ietf-tls-rfc2246-bis-13.txt and comparing the
> currently-assigned values to the order in which the messages occur in
> the protocol, I conclude that the applicable value should lie between
3
> and 10.
> 
> Taylor, Tom-PT [CAR:5N00:EXCH] wrote:
> > I was selected as General Area Review Team reviewer for this
> specification
> > (for background on Gen-ART, please see
> > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html)
> >
> > Document: draft-santesson-tls-supp-00.txt
> > Intended Status: Proposed Standard (Individual submission via AD)
> > Shepherding AD: Russ Housley
> > Review Trigger: IETF Last Call (ends 13 April 2006)
> >
> > Summary: This document is ready for Proposed Standard. I found one
nit:
> >
> > In the second sentence of section 7 IANA Considerations, the term
"TLS
> > Authorization Data Format identifiers" is used. I believe that
should be
> > "TLS Supplemental Data Format identifiers".
> >
> > I note that RFC 2119 capitalization was used for protocol
requirements,
> > but requirements on other documents defining specific extensions
used
> > small letter "must". I would be interested to learn if this is
accepted
> > policy, since I have charge of an I-D that is defining requirements
on
> > other documents.
> >
> > Tom Taylor
> >
> >
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