Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-bfd-directed-27

Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> Thu, 11 April 2024 07:31 UTC

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Date: Thu, 11 Apr 2024 09:31:23 +0200
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-bfd-directed-27
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Hi Linda,
Thank you for the review and your kind consideration of this work; much
appreciated.

Regards,
Greg

On Thu, Apr 11, 2024, 00:25 Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
wrote:

> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review result: Ready
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-mpls-bfd-directed-??
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review Date: 2024-04-10
> IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-15
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary: This document specifies the extension to the MPLS echo request
> that
> allows a BFD system to request the remote BFD peer transmits BFD control
> packets over the specified LSP. The document is well-structured and
> comprehensive, addressing an important aspect of network monitoring and
> maintenance.
>
> I think the document is ready for publication.
>
> Linda Dunbar
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>