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[Gen-art] Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-simple-partial-pidf-format-08.txt

Jari Urpalainen <jari.urpalainen@nokia.com> Mon, 29 October 2007 07:58 UTC

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From: Jari Urpalainen <jari.urpalainen@nokia.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-simple-partial-pidf-format-08.txt
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ext Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> Hi,
>
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
> reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
>
> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before
> posting a new version of the draft.
>
>
> Draft: draft-ietf-simple-partial-pidf-format-08.txt
> Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>
> Review Date: 26 October 2007
>
>
> Summary:
>
> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
> be fixed before publication.
>
>
> Comments:
>
> This document needs to use the newest boilerplates for Internet Drafts
> (see RFC 4748).
>
right, hopefully xml2rfc will be updated soon ;-).
> A few references in the References Section are never used in the text.
>
>
> Thanks,
>
> Gonzalo
>
I will add references to PIDF extensions in the text.
thanks, Jari


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