[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-altman-telnet-rfc2942bis-02.txt
"Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@alcatel-lucent.com> Wed, 10 January 2007 20:27 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-altman-telnet-rfc2942bis-02.txt
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-altman-telnet-rfc2942bis-02.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-altman-telnet-rfc2942bis-02.txt Title: Telnet Authentication: Kerberos Version 5 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani <vkg@alcatel-lucent.com> Review Date: January 10, 2007 IESG Telechat date: January 18, 2007 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standards track RFC. I do not have any substantive feedback other than a small nit: In drafts that I have written where I have referred to a pending RFC, I have always added a note to the RFC Editor. Something like: Note to RFC Editor: Please replace AAAA with the RFC number for [7]. Please replace CCCC with the RFC number for [5]. I inherited this behavior from someone else, so I just assumed that was the standard way of getting the RFC Editor's attention. If not, then discard the nit and proceed with publication. Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 2701 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9F-546, Lisle, Illinois 60532 (USA) Email: vkg@{alcatel-lucent.com,bell-labs.com,acm.org} WWW: http://www.alcatel-lucent.com/bell-labs _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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