[Gen-art] Minor addition to gen-art review of draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-10
Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com> Sun, 30 December 2018 01:13 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Minor addition to gen-art review of draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-10
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I missed one nit in s10: RFC 5440 currently appears in both s10.1 and s10.2. The entries in s10.2 for RFC 5440 and RFC 5221 are mixed up. Regards,Elwyn Sent from Samsung tablet.
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