[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-enum-calendar-service-03.txt

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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.


Document: draft-ietf-enum-calendar-service-03.txt
Reviewer: David Black
Review Date: 24 August 2007
IETF LC End Date: 6 September 

Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication.

Comments:
This is a relatively straightforward registration of an ENUM
service, and the draft does a good job of explaining the
service that is being registered.  I found one minor
nit in the service registration (Section 2):

   Security considerations:
      See section 3.

That should be "See section 4." as section 3 contains examples
and section 4 is the Security Considerations.

idnits 2.04.14 did not find any issues.

Thanks,
--David
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