Re: [Gen-art] Assignment: draft-ietf-netconf-prot-11.txt

Brian E Carpenter <brc@zurich.ibm.com> Mon, 27 February 2006 14:30 UTC

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I'm ready to go NO OBJECTION when I see these in the tracker.
I am happy with the -ssh draft too.

     Brian


Rob Enns wrote:
> Here are the proposed changes.
> 
> ------------------
> Page 18:
> 
> Add these 2 paragraphs to section 5.2:
> 
>     NETCONF carries configuration data inside the <config> element
>     that is specific to device's data model.  The protocol treats the
>     contents of that element as opaque data.  The device uses
>     capabilities to announce the set of data models which the
>     device implements.  The capability definition details the
>     operation and constraints imposed by data model.
> 
>     Devices and managers may support multiple data models, 
>     including both standard and proprietary data models.  
> 
> ------------------
> Page 36:
> 
> OLD:
>       element can appear as the <config> parameter and should identify a
>       local configuration file.
> 
> NEW:
>       element can appear instead of the <config> parameter and should 
>       identify a local configuration file.
> 
> ------------------
> Page 39:
> 
> OLD:
> 
>       config:
> 
>          Portion of the configuration subtree to edit.
> 
> NEW:
> 
>       config:
> 
>          A hierarchy of configuration data as defined by one of the
>          device's data models.  The contents MUST be placed in an
>          appropriate namespace, to allow the device to detect the
>          appropriate data model, and the contents MUST follow the
>          constraints of that data model, as defined by its capability
>          definition.  Capabilities are discussed in Section 8.
> 
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