Re: [Gen-art] Assignment: draft-ietf-netconf-prot-11.txt
Brian E Carpenter <brc@zurich.ibm.com> Mon, 27 February 2006 14:30 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Assignment: draft-ietf-netconf-prot-11.txt
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I'm ready to go NO OBJECTION when I see these in the tracker. I am happy with the -ssh draft too. Brian Rob Enns wrote: > Here are the proposed changes. > > ------------------ > Page 18: > > Add these 2 paragraphs to section 5.2: > > NETCONF carries configuration data inside the <config> element > that is specific to device's data model. The protocol treats the > contents of that element as opaque data. The device uses > capabilities to announce the set of data models which the > device implements. The capability definition details the > operation and constraints imposed by data model. > > Devices and managers may support multiple data models, > including both standard and proprietary data models. > > ------------------ > Page 36: > > OLD: > element can appear as the <config> parameter and should identify a > local configuration file. > > NEW: > element can appear instead of the <config> parameter and should > identify a local configuration file. > > ------------------ > Page 39: > > OLD: > > config: > > Portion of the configuration subtree to edit. > > NEW: > > config: > > A hierarchy of configuration data as defined by one of the > device's data models. The contents MUST be placed in an > appropriate namespace, to allow the device to detect the > appropriate data model, and the contents MUST follow the > constraints of that data model, as defined by its capability > definition. Capabilities are discussed in Section 8. > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
- RE: [Gen-art] Assignment: draft-ietf-netconf-prot… Joel M. Halpern
- RE: [Gen-art] Assignment: draft-ietf-netconf-prot… Rob Enns
- Re: [Gen-art] Assignment: draft-ietf-netconf-prot… Phil Shafer
- Re: [Gen-art] Assignment: draft-ietf-netconf-prot… Andy Bierman
- RE: [Gen-art] Assignment: draft-ietf-netconf-prot… Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
- Re: [Gen-art] Assignment: draft-ietf-netconf-prot… Joel M. Halpern
- RE: [Gen-art] Assignment: draft-ietf-netconf-prot… Rob Enns
- RE: [Gen-art] Assignment: draft-ietf-netconf-prot… Rob Enns
- Re: [Gen-art] Assignment: draft-ietf-netconf-prot… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Assignment: draft-ietf-netconf-prot… Brian E Carpenter